This post is inspired by the Haiku Heights word prompt for this weekend which is “Shimmer”.
Mellow moonlight drops
Diamonds on shimmering sea
Neap tide trickles out
From frosty shed roof
Hang diamanté drainpipes,
Glittering gutters
Lake shimmers ~ Ripples!
Mirror carp lured by the bait,
Fast strike ~ fish landed!
Setting sun shimmers
On ancient Black Sea coast as
Night train leaves Sochi
These were all wonderful, but the first one was breathtaking.
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Oh thank you x what a lovely comment x
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I love each Haiku for its unique image. I spent some time with each and traveled and deepened. I especially loved the alliterated D’s–drops diamonds and diamante drainpipes,
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Thank you Susan, lovely comment ~ I do love alliteration ~ in haiku when syllables are so few i think alliteration packs a punch to the lines. Thanks for reading and enjoy some of my other posts x
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Wonderfully crafted 🙂
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Thanks x I love to hear from you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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I’m ready to board the night train to catch a glimpse of that shimmering coast!
Shimmering Shadows & Haiku
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Oh you should, it is a magical experience travelling across Russia, Africa or anywhere really, especially at night. I’ve done long train journeys across Russia, Africa, Norway ans Switzerland in the past and loved every minute. Wish I could do more but a bit constrained now by family situation sadly. Still I have my memories x
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Great words and images. Really set up a great mood.
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Thanks Anthony, I really value your comments!
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Very nice set. I loved the diamonds on shimmering sea.
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Thank you x I was rather pleased with that. I wrote a poem once about the autumn leaves being my gold and the frost my silver and the raindrops my diamonds. But sometimes the sea sparkles like diamonds.
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I like all of these. I’m impressed with your vocabulary in the tidal department.
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Yes it is one of my hobby horses! Tides fascinate me so i buy the book of tides which is produced each year with details about the tides in different places. Bit of a tide anorak!
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So many wonderful images! I would love to see the shimmer on the Dead Sea some day. (thanks for the new (old) word ‘neap’ Had to look that one up!
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Ah so glad you enjoyed the post and learned a new word! I am fascinated by tides to the point of buying the table of tides each year so I know when it is high tide and when low tide. I don’t even live by the sea!
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I like the word… 😉
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